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Writer's Block: Two Truths and a Lie

August 12th, 2009 (10:18 pm)
tired

current location: Neptune
current mood: tired

Post two truths and a lie about yourself as an answer to Writer's Block. Have people guess which is the lie in the comments.
1) I'm addicted to Mnt. Dew. Horribly addicted.
2) I always rp as a hyperactive little girl when I can.
3) I haven't eaten a single fruit or vegetable in nearly 10 years.

Guess, I dare you :D.

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Rough Draft ch 1/Prolouge

March 28th, 2009 (10:26 am)
tired

current mood: tired

A/N: Time to get cracking at this, though I imagine it will take a while... Ah well.


The city of Leobai was a large metropolis that was located in the Blue controlled portion of Zanzibar, a small planet that was located abysmally far from Earth. It was a mainly military city, much like the only other city located on the planet, Charestone, which was controlled by the Red forces. The planet had become a pit stop for both armies which had resulted in the two 'port' cities to crop up. Despite tensions between the two bases, the cities managed to thrive which gave the soldiers a place to take leave and unwind. With all the interest stores began to appear and housing districts as well. This allowed non army personel to move into these cities and families began to follow their loved ones to Zanzibar. ((Just basic idea, will pretty up later. Orz, too tired right now))

-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- (Edit 4/13)
Notes: No, just absolutely no on the names for the cities. They will be hence forth called Red city and Blue Bay (because they've claimed the beach :D...). I'm going to go 'study' the characters more closely. I really want to nail their personalities just right. I'm also working on plotting the whole thing out before I start, so this might actually take longer than I was planning since I have to bassicly come up with the complete story now. I think I'll go with the basic Romance plot for this story with elements of the Adventure plot mixed in.
The lovers are thrown together.
The lovers are forced apart.
The lovers go against the odds to get back together.
+
Hero meets Villain.
They fight and the Villain wins.
The hero rises from his defeat to battle the Villain again, and wins the war.
=
???? (Umm, I'll work on that -_-; )
Premise: Love conquers all? (...I'll also work on that...)
In this story I guess Tex is the villain, not because I don't like her, but because she is willing to do anything to win and this would set her and the protagonist (who is really Crunchbite ^__^;; ) on opposite sides. The ally is Tucker, who will act as narrator and will somehow undoubtably be hurt by Tex, who is blinded by her quest to win? This is slightly confusing simply because Tucker picks up the sword which kind of thrusts Crunchbite out his main character position. I'll have to think on this more.
I kind of want to include some elements of Halo, since that is what RvB is based upon, but I have never played the games so I don't think this would be a good idea. I just wanted to include some little things (vague much), but I think I'll hold out on that idea.
I'm getting tired so I'll work more on this later, but next time I have to make sure to answer these questions for all the characters...
1. Who am I and what do I do?
2. What do I want?
3. What is the worst thing that could happen to me?

Sigh, this things going to be fucking epic even if I don't want it to be. The more characters you have, the longer the story will be. List of characters who will be actually involved and not just mentioned...
Tucker
Crunchbite
Tex
Church
Caboose
Grif
Simmons
Andy
Maybe characters that I haven't exactly figured out parts for:
York
Wash
Donut
Sheila
Sarge
Flowers
Doc
O'Malley
Lopez

I'm out for now, let's see what I come up with next time?
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- (Edited 4/14 only a few hours after the last time)
Here's also a character sheet that would be useful to fill out:

Character Sheet
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• Name:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Designation: “I am a…”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Positive Trait: “I’m liked because…”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Negative Trait: “I’m disliked because…”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Ego flaw: “Makes me great yet could destroy me…”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Ambition: “I want…”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Motive: “I’m doing this because…”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Internal Conflict: “I am troubled by…”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• External Conflict: “I am thwarted by…”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Secret: “I don’t know or I am hiding…”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Ordeal/Reversal: “Last thing I ever want to happen…?”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Epiphany: “I will discover…”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
• Bio:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Till next time!

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Rough Draft/Brainstorm of Crunchbite/Tucker

March 27th, 2009 (09:14 am)
tired

current location: Neptune
current mood: tired


A/N: So, this story is an AU but not completely removed from the rvb universe. For example, there is still the red team and the blue team, but some members of the Blood Gulch teams will be given different jobs and lives. Sheila, Andy, and Lopez will be given human bodies but Crunchbite will keep his alien form unless there are any objections.

Bassically, in this universe Reds and Blues are in a temporary truce while there are being negotiations with Alien Covenant (which I like to picture being held on Zanzibar). Crunchbite is there for the negotiations with his translator, Andy, and a few other representatives. No, Tucker is not working on the negotiations... he is a janitor at the ... UN? Diplomatic.... building thingy? Argh, no idea what to call it right now D:.

Wondering why Tucker is a janitor? Well, all he has is a high school diploma and he moves around a lot so he doesn't keep jobs for long. The reason he moves around a lot? He's Church's army wife :DDD.... Pftt, that is what he calls himself. He had no plans after high school and he didn't want to join the military so he just decided to stalk his childhood friend around from base to base. Tucker's just really lonely Tucker just didn't want to put in the effort into making a new friend.

Anyways, Tucker and Crunchbite meet and somehow keep running into each other. Tucker is just being clumsy and Crunchbite is bored so he's just using Tucker for amusement since he seems to have motor skill troubles around him. One day, Tucker is even more clumsy than usual and manages to land himself in a hole where he locates a weird shinning sword which cements their fates together.....

I think you can get an idea of where I would go from there
though a fangirly part of my brain screams out forced marriage for diplomacy and that's the basis of my idea. I hope to include as many characters from the series as possible :D. Sheila is head of security and Grif and Simmons are working guard duty though the end up just arguing a lot and talking with Tucker. Caboose is the recruit that somehow manages to attach himself to Church and becomes friends/rivals for Church's affection with Tucker. Feel free to suggest anything for any character, I'm not planning on including them all from the start :D.

Feel free to tell me if this idea is stupid......

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Eric the Unready: Episode 2 Princesses and Copy Protection

February 14th, 2009 (07:36 pm)
anxious

current location: Neptune
current mood: anxious
current song: Silence


Soooo, it's been forever since I posted more of Eric the Unready. Sorry about that, but I haven't had internet in months and I take too long doing these to go to the public library which has an hour limit on the use of their comps >(. So I'm back and ready to give you some more of our goffy knight :D!

Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee more Eric the Unready!!!!!!!!!!!Collapse )

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Eric the Unready: Episode 1 Kiss the Pig

November 2nd, 2008 (02:22 pm)
amused

current mood: amused

Welcome to the first instalment of Eric the Unready! I hope you enjoy this, seeing as it is my first one :D.

ONWARD!Collapse )


Dadun~! LEGEND! Um, I actually don't know anything about this company D:



What, did they think I forgot already?

Heh, I was a little to eager on the screencap button :D.

And here's the title page! A little plain, but oh wells :D.

Here's a fun fact: the first time through I missed all these screen caps because I was holding down the ctrl button. Orz.

Look at the little horseys :D




Yeah, there's a lot of text in this game, but look first look Eric :D.

Lol, "Hold on, I got this."

Jousting for Dummies :B.

"I'M BLIND!"

Oh Eric, you butterfingers you :D.

Dang trees, always interfering in my jousts >(.

Hah. Gadzooks XB.



Apples are deadly foes



PARTY~!

Heh, I feel like this is one long blonde joke :B.

Cup to the face

Down he goes! Afjskds, that pig is starting to creep me out now :(.

They all looked so shocked...

I think the guy in green is a pyro. See the glee on his face? SO MUCH GLEE.

Now that I'm staring at him, I wonder who dressed Eric? Such a weird color combo

Damn, missed the poof of them dissapearing :(. Mr. Pyro still remains though!

"Hey where'd everybody go? Oooh, fire :D."

I wonder how many times he'll say this on our adventure? :B

Then we're back to the title screen as the game loads.

"No need to thank me, I was just doing my job :B" Shoot, missed a screen before this >(.

Hey, that all took skill, baby :<!

But my face is so pretty, my mama told me so :.(

This is out first task, and this is what our set up looks like normally.

"fshgjkjs, why do they always go to jump into the toilet?!"

Haha, I wanted to see what would happen :D. He tossed you away like a used tissue, Eric! Your not pretty enough for him!

Click one command, select object

No you're not, door!! >[

Time for some pyrotechnics >D.

Afjksjfkj picky >[

Hehehe XD

He looks flamable :<.

Let's see what this star thingy does...

Hmmm...

Let's fly the coop.

Those cows want to eat my soul.

Finally! The first signs of a goal (at least for me).

They never did anything to you :<.

asjkfjghs wrong command >(

Time to raid the farmer for supplies. Hmm... I'll just take them all!!


:O I have a feeling I'm not going to like this bottle.


Back out ot the farmyard.

Why not get in some bondage while I'm out here :D?

ashjjkskdkj to? >o

Grrr...

Time to explore my options :D

Lol XD. Pop culture, it's everywhere :D.

Oh, finally figured out how to hold a conversation

Eh :B? This one went over my head sadly.

D: D: D: D:


I feel that he is mocking my pain... :<

Time to get this over with D:

"Oh look, newspaper. Yoink :B!"

Cutting edge journalism :B.

"Nice little retirement home, it is," he comments as he watches the place burn.

That's the real way to die :D.

'You must have 2 refrences ready.' Lol :D.

Back to bussiness D:

@#$%!!!!

I'm cutting out some of my failed attempts. Boy, do I suck at this :(.

:D

But I like bondage D:.

Chivalry School was out of funds so they cut Sex Ed :D.

Stupid pig grrr...

I was sure this would work! >(

Yay! Oh wait, no, not yay!! D:

JSKJAHJKSLJKDSHASHKAI D: D: D: THESE FIENDISH LIES!!!

"This wasn't in the job description :C."

Of course I gave it another try :B!

Stop mocking meeeee D:

At this point I was foaming at the mouth and laughing insanely :D.

I knew it andohdeargodisitwinkingatme?!!!!

"Weeeee :D!!!"

Finally figured out I could double click the rope. Lol, stuck between screen changing :B.

"I'll just gather up my belongings and be on my way."


"I'm sorry I think you're a nice pig and all, but I'm not ready for this level of commitment!!"

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!

WHY DIDN'T YOU CHECK YOU OLD FART?!

Curse you cows!!

I didn't manage to get the screen after this for some reason, but you get the point. See you next time for the next adventure :D!!!

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Parvovirus paper for school

October 23rd, 2008 (06:06 am)
bitchy

current location: Neptune
current mood: bitchy

I figured this plan was safer than e-mailing it to myself =D. Hopefully this works Danielle!



Dear Mrs. Michaels:



I am sorry to hear that Dr. Nichols has diagnosed Rex with Canine Parvovirus. You requested that more information be sent to you regarding your pet's ailment and hopefully this letter will answer all your questions about Canine Parvovirus.

Rex has been diagnosed with Parvovirus Enteritis, the most common form of Parvo. The doctor determined this by using three tests. First, he checked to see if Rex was exhibiting any of the clinical signs of diarrhea, vomiting, anorexia, weight loss, blood in the feces, fever, and swelling in the throat. Rex was showing the clinical signs so Dr. Nichols ordered blood work for your pet and the results show that Rex had an extremely low amount of White Blood Cells. These final test to confirm Dr. Nichols' suspicion was a fecal antigen test, which checks to see if the virus is in your pet's fecal material. Parvo is spread through fecal material and is highly contagious. The test came back positive and we quarantined Rex.

Parvovirus became a recognizable disease in 1978 due to an epidemic. Parvo is a DNA virus with different strains that affect dogs, wolves, foxes, and a few affect cats. The two major strains are parvovirus 1 and parvovirus 2 (CPV- 1 and CPV-2). CPV-2 has mutated into CPV-2a -c and affects both dogs and cats, though there are no reports of domestic cats with the disease.

Parvo can be spread through the nasal and oral tissues, and through feces. The virus takes 4-14 days to mature in the pet before it begins to spread the disease, sometimes without even showing symptoms. Parvo offten infects puppies and attacks the cells in the puppy's intestines and, in much rarer cases, the muscles of the heart. The intestines are where most nutrients are obsorbed into the body, but Parvo destroys the inner-linning of the intestines so the pet lack nourishment. Also, Parvo attacks the immune system which means the pet is able to become infected with other diseases with ease.

Sadly, there is no cure. All that can be done is to provide the pet with supportive care. Fluids are given to the pet to prevent dehydration as well as anitbiotics to prevent infection as well as other medication to help prevent vomiting and diarrhea. With quick treatment most pets survive, but without 80% of affected pets will die.

Mrs. Michaels you managed to bring in Rex early enough that your pet has a large chance of survival. To prevent Rex from catching this virus again you should disenfect your home with bleach. Please keep Rex away from where he did his 'buissness' because the virus can remain for up to 5 months and it is hard to combat the disease in an outside enviroment. Also, make sure to have Rex vaccinated regurally.


Sincerly:
Animal Vet Hospital


Bibliography:
http://www.avma.org/animal_health/canine_parvovirus_faq.asp

http://www.mismr.org/educational/parvo.html

http://pet-diseases.suite101.com/article.cfm/canine_parvovirus_in_dogs

http://www.peteducation.com/article.cfm?c=2+2102&aid=467

http://www.petmd.com/dog/conditions/viral/c_dg_canine_parvovirus_infection

http://www.pets.ca/encyclopedia/parvovirus_dog.htm

http://www.sheltermedicine.com/portal/is_parvovirus_canine.shtml

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Random Ghosts Pilot Chapter

August 17th, 2008 (01:26 pm)
annoyed

current mood: annoyed

So, this is an old story of mine that I abandoned because it was... well, horribly written and not thought out at all. It was written poorly and I can't even try to add to it in the state it is in currently. So I tore it down and I'm starting from the bottom.

This tale truly begins with Mike and her childhood (yes Mike is a girl). But I feel that starting with her story takes away from the surprise and mystery that I had in the original story. So MIke's story will probably be the sequal to Random Ghosts.

So this tale begins with a ignorant college student....



The sticker on his chest declared 'Hello, my name is TIM' to anyone who bothered to look. Tim shifted around in the cold metal chair as he glanced around at the circle he was sitting in; everyone had a similar sticker that stuck out oddly against their chests. Tim noticed a girl trying to smooth the sticker perfectly over the swell of her breasts, his eyes glued more to the twitchy movements of her hands rather than her chest.

 

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It's been a long time...

August 13th, 2008 (03:13 pm)
jubilant

current location: Neptune
current mood: jubilant
current song: The Killers

Ugh, this place still exists I see. I've been gone for a long time, but I just got the consuming urge to write something- anything really. I was thinking about how I should go about scratching this itch and I remembered this place. Ha. I guess I'm not much of a blogger, eh? Oh well, it's not a vital life skill XP. I actually doubt anyone ever read this, but I guess that was the point when I started this. So, I'm not sorry.

Ah, that's always a good feeling. So, I guess this is where I should be spilling my guts? Hmph, not that likely but I guess I'll try to get something out on 'paper'. Haha, how sad is that I'm a writter yet I've been stuck in a funk for so long? It used to be that was the major thing I prided myself on was my writing; I guess I just wasn't satisfied with my skill and this is where I ended up. Limbo. Fuck, this is deffinatly not where I wanted to be at this point in my life.

I have so many characters scratching at the walls of my skull for an outlet that sometimes I feel that I'm loosing my mind. At least sketching relieves some of this tension but it's not the same, especially when I just can't draw that well at the moment. I just wish this could be a little easier; I can remember when the words just used to fall down on the page so easily. What happened? I guess I just hit that 'bump' in my life and it killed something in me. Hopefully I'm close to awakening that again because I feel kind of lonely without it.

Bah, enough of that! Clear the air, I'm chocking on this shit! Hackcough!! Bah, I hate it when I do that! On to a much more cheerful topic!!

Ever guy that I've ever liked a psycho/crazy person!! Yay! Haha, actually I do find this kind of funny XD. No, seriously every time I think back on a crush I've had, no matter who it is, they're always at least not considered sane. My friends just bassicly assume that if he's crazy I'll probably love him. It makes me worry about my future dating experiences. I guess I won't be able to trust my own judgement when it comes to that, but I'll cross that bridge when I come to it. Hopefully it never comes down to having my friends choose out my boyfriends...  I shudder and cringe at the thought. 

I'm thinking about starting a story on this site. None of the stories that I'm working on at the moment since I'm having trouble with them, but hopefully something. I think I need some anonymus feedback... Some detailed and critical anonymus feedback. I'm really trying to find some kind of cure for my writters block, and I'm hoping a stunt like this just might be what I need. So, hopefully I'll start posting something here and join a community where I can get feedback =D. I guess that's all I can think of at the moment, so I guess I'll just end this post.

Can't wait to see how things turn out <3. 

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My results

January 4th, 2008 (03:09 pm)
amused
Tags: , , ,

current location: Neptune
current mood: amused



Switching Stoic

You're usually the kind who is the leader in whatever you do. Even so, socializing isn't your forte. You'd much rather be alone somewhere reading a book or working on something quietly. People just tend to be unnecessary distractions, and you could more than do without them. At least, that's what you'd like people to believe In truth you are actually rather scared. Though, not even heavy torture would get you to admit it. You just don't know how to deal with people, because you've never really had much experience. It's because of this that it usually takes an outgoing, experienced person to knock down some of your walls. They are everything you aren't; friendly, popular, and self-assured. And, after all, opposites attract. Relationships with other Switching Stoics tend to fizzle out rather quickly because neither of you know what to do about how you feel. You need someone to help you understand these strange emotions called love and desire, and to let you know it's ok to express them. As a result, you usually end up uke. Well, at least to start out. Maybe after you get a handle on how things are done you will switch your role. Hence the title.

Likeliness of being seme: 40%
Likeliness of being uke: 60%
Some fellow Switching Stoics: Ran (Weiss Kreuz), Sanzo (Saiyuki), Heero (Gundam Wing), Hisoka (Yami no Matsuei)

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Writer's Block: Google Me

November 27th, 2007 (03:16 pm)
current location: Neptune
current song: Boys and Girls

Have you ever Googled your own name? How do you feel about the results?
 Hahahahahaha XDDD. If you mean my username, Veereble, I have. It's only stuff that I have posted on various places on the net. Nothing but me, baby XD. Mainly it's devart and here on Lj, and I can only feel special ^___^. No one else uses Veereble but me! Woot!! *continues to be a goofy dork*